Saturday, July 30, 2011

Sense

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The time is coming to an end, and it’s time to say farewell.

photo: Kevin & Yanna

From the ancient Greece you fought,
To the great abyss we thought,
How long should we live?
How far should we go?

Then it came to us,
Sense by sense
I started to feel you’re breaking out
Asking some foolish questions
That only a foolish person could answer,
Will it end like this?

Or Will it lead us to the promising place i know,
I'll stand and race my sword but
Then again, Sense by sense were coming up to the end and
Sense by sense your gaining what I lend.!

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28 comments:

  1. MarieJuly 31, 2011 at 7:32 AM

    Sweet! :)

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  2. DustMay 21, 2013 at 7:56 PM

    Sense by sense. This is so profound.

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  3. Franc RamonMay 21, 2013 at 8:05 PM

    I guess there are just some battles/ relationship that moves on forward and those that end and you end up starting anew.

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  4. working mamaMay 21, 2013 at 9:35 PM

    so true ending a relationship is sad but knowing deeply the reason behind the breakup sometimes answers the big question WHY

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  5. Mai FloresMay 21, 2013 at 10:58 PM

    Hmmm... a failing relationship. I guess when two people can never really work things out, despite doing all the work, then it should be time to let go and move forward.

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  6. MaiMay 22, 2013 at 12:15 AM

    Sad that a good relationship has to end. Most people now ask themselves "Whatever happened to 'and they lived happily ever after"?

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  7. JosietMay 22, 2013 at 2:41 AM

    Ahh teenage love! Some of the most unforgettable :)

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  8. AlgeneMay 22, 2013 at 3:48 AM

    "We're coming to and end.." I don't like things coming to an end but if it's for the better, then I'd try to love endings..

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  9. markpogiMay 22, 2013 at 5:18 AM

    Tutal, there are plenty of fish in the ocean. Grab a boat and fish for one. XD

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  10. Gigi BelenoMay 22, 2013 at 6:09 AM

    Though it hurts that something has to END, it can also mean there's a NEW beginning.

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  11. emsMay 22, 2013 at 10:23 AM

    Nice words you got there, Papaleng. This will make a very wonderful song is you want it to. I love it.

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  12. Chubskulit RoseMay 22, 2013 at 3:40 PM

    Some things are not meant to be, even love.

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  13. Teresa MartinezMay 22, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    That is simply how relationships go, some may end but hopefully one will be kept for a lifetime.

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  14. kulasaMay 22, 2013 at 5:23 PM

    your poetry never fails to leave me in awe, I am such a fan :)

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  15. Pao TolentinoMay 22, 2013 at 7:40 PM

    Now if we could just whip out some guitar riffs for this piece. Very rich and compelling thoughts as usual. Great job!

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  16. Sarah JeanMay 22, 2013 at 8:39 PM

    Its sad to bid farewell to a relationship that is like a slowly dying love. Hope to hear this poem to a song, I would love to hear it.

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  17. lenciliciousMay 22, 2013 at 11:58 PM

    I hate farewell but there's no gain without pains. I love how you put the words together in this poem. :)

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  18. QuimaMay 23, 2013 at 9:17 AM

    Ending a relationship is never fun at all. They say you just have to let go and move on. But what the heck letting go is not easy, it eats you up from the inside. :|

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  19. Jessica CassidyMay 23, 2013 at 9:49 AM

    Some good things never last, why can't they last? What a sweet poem that is Papaleng :-) May these two find each other's arms one day when the right time comes :-)

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  20. CheerfulMay 23, 2013 at 11:20 AM

    oh well, another great works of yours, talented talaga! :) always sad to end any kind of relationship but I believe that things happen for a reason and someone will come in God's perfect time! :)

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  21. Justin BuenaguaMay 23, 2013 at 6:55 PM

    sense by sense.. this is really a great poem.. I love how deep it is yet so shallow that you can easily grasp the idea and relate to it... :)

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  22. Claire R.May 23, 2013 at 9:50 PM

    We can't promise forever but we are always hopeful for a lasting relationship. So, just move on and live life, a long the way you will meet someone better or yet best for you.

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  23. Chubskulit RoseJuly 25, 2013 at 10:26 AM

    Another fine master piece from an FBF poet.

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  24. Tingting de RimartiJuly 25, 2013 at 7:01 PM

    Young love, sweet love!!!!

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  25. MarieJuly 25, 2013 at 9:03 PM

    Sayang na pag-ibig nga paps.

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  26. Ria CervantesJuly 26, 2013 at 12:55 AM

    Making up and breaking up is a combi deal we all have to face when in a relationship. It's just sad that something so beautiful can end.

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  27. betchaiJuly 26, 2013 at 7:20 AM

    it's always sad to see relationship ends, but sense by sense it always give us wonderful memories and lessons

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  28. cheerfulJuly 26, 2013 at 11:52 AM

    very well written poem with full of emotions! galing mo talaga Papaleng. :)

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