Saturday, August 11, 2012

A Very Elusive Kiss

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A moving poem about a man’s long desire for a kiss from his girl.

photo: Grace

See how the daisy giggles
As the bee whispers sweet nothing
Her eyes suddenly twinkles
When a kiss…her lover passionately is giving.

Watch the evergreen tree, doing her enticing dance
Though unknowingly…an entity is taking a glance
And suddenly, the gentle wind gives her a cozy embrace.
Thus, the bewildered beauty was kept in a trance

Fate reveals and Nature law dictates
Happiness comes in pair, after the rain…a rainbow will show
Somewhere out there…a perfect mate awaits
But, why can’t I with you?

The waves…will forever embrace the sparkling sands
And the moonlight … will endlessly kisses the sea;
What is a kiss significance,
If you can’t spare one for me?

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34 comments:

  1. Noel AutorAugust 11, 2012 at 9:52 PM

    Nice poem with a picture of a beautiful lady.

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  2. Noel AutorAugust 11, 2012 at 11:01 PM

    A nice poem and a beautiful lady.

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  3. FrancAugust 11, 2012 at 11:44 PM

    Great poem. I like the last part

    "What is a kiss significance,

    If you can’t spare one for me?"

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    1. papalengAugust 13, 2012 at 9:38 AM

      Thank Bro for appreciating my humble piece of Poetry.

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    2. FrancSeptember 30, 2015 at 6:46 AM

      I also like the parallelism with the rainbow and the waves. You are really a maestro when it comes to Poetry Papaleng.

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  4. Marco | The Soul ExplorerAugust 12, 2012 at 4:22 AM

    Love it papz!

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  5. Noel AutorAugust 12, 2012 at 4:47 PM

    The poem is beautiful. As beautiful as the woman in the picture.

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    1. papalengAugust 13, 2012 at 9:42 AM

      :) Sir, the lady is a very dear friend of mine.

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  6. fallenrhainnesAugust 12, 2012 at 10:30 PM

    ganda naman ng girl na yan papaleng:)

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  7. Rizza GatchalianAugust 13, 2012 at 3:21 AM

    Sweet thang! :D

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  8. Rovie AguisAugust 14, 2012 at 9:05 PM

    Sweet poem :). Thanks for sharing po. Who's that girl papaleng? ganda!

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    1. papalengAugust 15, 2012 at 10:41 AM

      Her name is Grace. pero na-disgrasya ako sa kanya..LOL

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  9. betchaiAugust 15, 2012 at 4:48 PM

    love the poem, so sweet, you deserve such sweet kiss.

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    1. papalengAugust 15, 2012 at 11:17 PM

      Thanks appreciating my humble poem. Poetry is my first love not girls..LOL

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  10. Life In GadgetsSeptember 29, 2015 at 8:56 AM

    Great Poem and moving indeed

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  11. Elizabeth O.September 29, 2015 at 10:07 AM

    It sounds like it was written by a frustrated lover longing for affection. It's beautiful!

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  12. Ling TanSeptember 29, 2015 at 6:15 PM

    The last two lines. I loved it. It told the whole story didn't it. Move on dude, might be for the better ;)

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  13. UnknownSeptember 29, 2015 at 7:08 PM

    What a beautiful poem. There's so much emotions being said there.

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  14. UnknownSeptember 29, 2015 at 7:31 PM

    The poem is actually really simple, after reading it you already know the message it wants to put across. So, did you get that kiss?

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  15. Jason P.September 30, 2015 at 5:50 AM

    What a sweet and romantic poem!! So many feels in the writing! :D

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  16. doroexploreroSeptember 30, 2015 at 7:26 AM

    Haha sweet but hopeless romantic? Haha the best thing to do is say it! hahaha

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  17. Mia FooSeptember 30, 2015 at 7:53 AM

    nice poem! simply put across and straight to the point. i especially like the last 2 sentences of the poem.

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  18. LoriSeptember 30, 2015 at 10:29 AM

    An interesting, romantic poem. It looks like I end up reading many romantic poems these days, as I just received a book with many poems (various themes).

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  19. Fred SaidSeptember 30, 2015 at 5:51 PM

    This poem is a great example of Personification for kids in school The daisies giggling, the bees whispering, the waves embracing. Very eloquent pictures.

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  20. UnknownSeptember 30, 2015 at 7:31 PM

    Nice poem, you have a knack for this. I'm partial to the part about happiness comes in pairs, that after the rain, a rainbow will follow. It's so true in reality.

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  21. Katrina CentenoSeptember 30, 2015 at 7:54 PM

    Nice. Did you write this? Have you ever thought of doing spoken word poetry? I have seen a few videos here in the Philippines. It was impressive.

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  22. What Yvonne LovesOctober 1, 2015 at 1:55 AM

    I really admire people who create such amazing poems. I was only able to make a few because of school requirements but never had the chance to create because of inspiration. Bravo to you sir. :)

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  23. FX777222999October 1, 2015 at 4:08 AM

    The words speaks for the kiss and love; it really gives the moment of the simile which when feeling desires.

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  24. oyhzOctober 1, 2015 at 7:05 AM

    nice poem. simple and clear in its subject.

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  25. UnknownMemoryOctober 1, 2015 at 7:21 AM

    Romantic. Loving the last part. It's my kind of story. Do write more.

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  26. UnknownOctober 1, 2015 at 9:23 AM

    Is this grace a friend of yours or someone popular? Haha, nice poem, but the photo make people think you are referring to her. Not sure if that's considered a confession?

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  27. LeeOctober 1, 2015 at 6:24 PM

    poems likre this made me feel like reading books of love and hope again.. great poem! you're really good on writing poems!

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