Wednesday, December 19, 2012

To Memories I Go

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My son showed what’s in his heart after breaking up with his girl.

photo: Daevy

Just when I started to find a way
To carry you to eternity
Yet eternity seems so far
Perhaps we’re to close to our end.

Yet we’re near to the future
But it seems you’re breaking up
And every pieces of our memories
Is lost in the great abyss.

Will you ever find me?
If I’m tossed with those memories
Or maybe turn back and face
Our destiny.

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26 comments:

  1. Chubskulit RoseDecember 19, 2012 at 9:38 AM

    Awww I hope he heals his broken heart soon. She's pretty and I love the poem!

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    1. Chubskulit RoseDecember 26, 2012 at 5:51 AM

      Been there and done that and survived. Time will heal the wound and he would find the right gal for him.

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  2. Sam LanuzaDecember 19, 2012 at 4:09 PM

    The poem is just sad. Extreme emotions turn us to be a poet sometimes.

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  3. DhemzDecember 19, 2012 at 5:18 PM

    ayay! sabi nga nila destiny is not a matter of chance, it is a matter of choice...ganda ni nene!

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  4. RcelDecember 19, 2012 at 9:17 PM

    Your son is a poet, Sir! And yes, when heartbreaks happen, it can often make one a good poet. I am sorry for your son's rough breakup. I hope he'll recover soon! :)

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  5. Rovie AguisDecember 19, 2012 at 10:38 PM

    What a sad story! It is really painful breaking up with the one you love pero okay lang yun parang ang babata pa nila eh...

    Another full of emotion and touching poem, Papaleng :)

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  6. Teresa MartinezDecember 20, 2012 at 9:43 AM

    Breaking up is always painful no matter how it is handled. The good thing about it is that pain will also come to pass.

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  7. lenciliciousDecember 20, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    May nakalaan, kung sino man siya, Diyos ang nakakaalam.

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  8. Nova HedgesDecember 20, 2012 at 4:51 PM

    i do hope your son will find the one for him someday..and may he get over with the pain and move on

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  9. emzkieDecember 20, 2012 at 6:06 PM

    that is one beautiful poem papaleng. thanks for sharing. =)

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  10. Noel AutorDecember 21, 2012 at 4:41 PM

    Just let go. Something better might be in the futurel

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  11. Mary Anne VelascoDecember 25, 2012 at 10:34 PM

    That's sad. I love the poem though.

    I hope that your son's heart will stop hurting soon. Parting ways do hurt really really bad. But life goes on. It's a good thing that you're always there for him.

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  12. Franc RamonDecember 25, 2012 at 10:48 PM

    that these sad verses will just be mere memories of an overall happy life.

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  13. MaricelDecember 25, 2012 at 11:39 PM

    Time heals all wounds, they say. Letting go of someone you hold dear is one heartbreaking moment. But the same way fire molds iron, heartbreaks, for all the pain they cause, can make a person stronger.

    Nice poem, Papaleng!

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  14. cheDecember 26, 2012 at 1:03 AM

    breaking up, no matter how they have decided (mutual or not) is just so painful. Ihope your son can recover soon.

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  15. Shengkay ApuhinDecember 26, 2012 at 2:16 AM

    breaking up is one of the saddest event a person encounter in this lifetime I guess..but also gives us lesson..basta ako I beleive things happen for a reason..hindi man natin alam ang rason sa ngayon..eventually mare-realize din natin ito..
    ..pretty!

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  16. MaryJane TauyanDecember 26, 2012 at 3:41 AM

    omg!! Sad for the girl though, I dont think in my part I wont be happy seeing my face in a website and with the saddest form or poetry! hehe Just my opinion though, Though the poem sounds really great! xx

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  17. Jessica CassidyDecember 26, 2012 at 11:26 AM

    Awww! What a pretty girl and beautiful poem :-) Hope your son will feel better soon :-) Heartaches are not good but it gives us to focus on other things and move on :-)

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  18. Nova HedgesDecember 26, 2012 at 3:04 PM

    we do learn from our mistakes by being hurt, i'm sure your son will find someone that will be for him forever...

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  19. markpogiDecember 26, 2012 at 3:37 PM

    I remember creating poems like these way back when my heart got broke.

    Like it or not, no one is exempted from having his/her heart broken. Otherwise, we should always move on and move forward as there is always someone out there waiting for us.

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  20. claireDecember 26, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    Breaking up is the most painful part of a relationship. I've been there and I learned from it.

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  21. Kenneth RavidaDecember 27, 2012 at 3:56 AM

    painful talaga yan break-up, but their are many fishes in the sea. ano lang sundin mo lang yung saying ni John cena never give up

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  22. DemsDecember 27, 2012 at 7:05 AM

    I've gotten my heart broken for a number of reasons and it's never easy. But it doesn't mean it's the end. It's actually the start of something new, since we end up being a better person after. I pray for him, God is very close to the brokenhearted. :')

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  23. special education philippinesDecember 27, 2012 at 10:26 PM

    That's really sweet of your son to make a poem to express his emotions instead of writing hurtful messages to his ex-girlfriend. Sometimes we don't know how to deal with our emotions that we are overcome with it and we do things that we regret. At least you can say that your son is emotionally adept.

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  24. AlgeneDecember 29, 2012 at 11:46 AM

    Go for a healthy body and mind for the whole year. This is what I should do, too, next year. I need to focus on getting myself back in shape. Oh I wish a prosperous 2013 for all of us!

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  25. Ralph Marcuss ManarangJanuary 23, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    Isang tunay na ROMANTIKO!

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