Monday, January 9, 2012

My Lonely Heart

As pain slowly pierces your heart, will you still find the strength to save a relationship?

photo: Diane

Ahead lies an empty road to journey
Each light that adorns the streets are gloomy
The fading moon is the only ally
Who lits my way a light
But then still… I seek my way to find you.

My soul …now wasted and tired
With all the battles we’ve been through
You and I … hoping for something good to happen.
Tears flowing … as pain slowly, steadily pierces my heart to death
The sound of silence … rips my heart apart…killing me…

My mind …reflecting and expecting for something
You alone can answer
Will you ever be with me again?
Because I’ve completely lost everything
By the time you left and say goodbye …

24 comments:

  1. Sad sad naman! :(

    Ganda niya talaga paps! :)

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  2. Breakups are never easy but like they say - what can't kill you can make you stronger - so don't close your doors, unless you get to meet someone better, choz! :) :D

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  3. so sad, are you okay,Papaleng. saying goodbye is not easy and sometime we lost our sanity for a week or a month before we can move on and face the real world.

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  4. I do not feel lonely when I see that pretty, smiling face of your kiddo.

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  5. I'm sure in the next life, you will be with that special person.

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  6. I wonder who's Diane in your life, Papaleng? LOL! Baket sobrang apektado ang peg nyo? Hihihi! Seriously, this people is so morose. It's never easy to go through break ups.

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    1. Alam mo na yun. She left kasi for Manhattan, NY

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  7. It never gets easier but it can be mended. Like what the song said, "We're not broken just bend, so we can (still) learn to love again".

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  8. Wow! My soul........ wasted and tired....... nakakaiyak naman. :-(

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  9. aww painful and sad naman to.. I don't want to indulge too much mahahawa ako sa sadness hehe.

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  10. reading your ode, i remember a favorite song of mine - something like, "are you gonna stay with the one who loves you or are you going back to the one you love". somebody's staying or somebody's leaving -parties affected may get to be happy or be sad. however, one thing should be exulting -the experience of falling in love.

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  11. Parang napakalungkot naman ng kwentong ito Papaleng. Goodbyes are always part of every relationship I just hope they will find their way together...

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  12. Ended on a sad note but good byes always comes with hello.

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  13. goodbye is hard but we have to face it no matter what it is

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  14. Sad poem. Goodbyes are not the end of everything though. :)

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  15. Goodbye is hard, but it doesn't mean the end of everything. I think, its a start of a brand new beginning.

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  16. Sometimes we really have to say goodbye to people we love the most...even if it's hard. Time would heal the wounds naman. ;)

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  17. Naka-relate po ako dito at some point. Then again, it's through failed relationships that eventually lead you to the right one. :) Goodbyes are meant to be said, so that a new "hello" can also be welcomed. :) Nicely written poem by the way. :)

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  18. "Because I've completely lost everything." I always hear this from my friends who have ended their relationships with the ones they love. Saying goodbye may be hard but sometimes it's the best thing to do. The lonely heart will soon find the right one.

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  19. Awww :( Very sad poem.
    Oh well, goodbyes are not always the end. Always remember that there is always a rainbow after the rain.

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