Sunday, September 8, 2013

Why Do I Miss You?

A lover staring at the stars as he reminisced her past love.

photo: Saya

It looks everything is going fine
Believing our love will stand the time
A silly mistake turns the tide
Forever I lost you by my side.

It is the only reason I knew
That answers the question, “Why do I miss you”.
The fairy-tale feelings of love trust and care
Together we cherish, hold and share.

Forgetting not all the memories we had
Both the good times and the bad
The sheepish smile and the childish kiss
Truly are special things I really miss.

All the promises we shared on the phone
Is now all vintage time I spend alone
The stars witnessed when we made our vows
The stars are still there but the vows are gone.

Thus, why do I miss you?

26 comments:

  1. "Because we never stop silently loving those who we who we once loved out loud...” :( ;(

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  2. "The stars are still there but the vows are gone."- so meaningful..it makes me want to cry...your model is so pretty :) keep writing romantic phrases..I am a fan :)

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  3. Hmmm...who is that girl, idol, hehe!
    Romantic poem, love it!

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  4. As usual, You're the best Papaleng... But I'm wondering who's that pretty girl in the photo? hehe

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    1. Secret. ;) She's a Filipina holding a Malaysian citizenship.

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    2. may pa secret-secret ka pang nalalaman papaleng ha. hehe

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  5. ang sweet mo,papaleng. I'm sure your wife love you most being makata.

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  6. So emotional naman itong composition mo, Papaleng! It conveys something true to all human race: that our heart is capable of remembering someone who used to be a part of our life! ;-)

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  7. Hmmmm... your poem papaleng reminded me of someone that i used to know and would really like to forget... char! hehehe... nice poem or song or poem... hehehe...

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  8. That's love! Your model is gorgeous!

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  9. Wow, so makata, I like the poem, such a lucky lady indeed.

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  10. you really speak so well the words in my heart during those times I was nursing broken heart, haha! you are just so good papaleng in writing deep emotions, bringing them out, so that others may heal and/or reminisce in those words you wrote.

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  11. Naku! Romantiko, simpatiko talaga ang image nyo Papaleng. Hehehe! Parang may pinagdadaanan ah. LOL! I wonder who's the lovely model featured in this poem?

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  12. Wow another chix! Next time tay ako naman gawan mo ng poem ha hehe.

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  13. romantic and cool! Keep on posting your thoughts and feelings #Happy Tuesday :)

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  14. deep and romantic! galing mo papaleng!

    cheers! :)

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  15. made me reminisce something haha.. made me miss someotne.. Didn't see the photo in your post ..

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  16. Parang love story ko lang to. Hehehe.

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  17. nice one...galing mo po talaga! :) pretty ng model natin Papaleng, ha!

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  18. You miss someone because at some point in your life, he or she became a part of you :) So even if things are perfectly fine, still you miss him / her :)

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  19. thanks for those comment..

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  20. :) like.. But i dont like that gurl.. In the picture..

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  21. Oh something we sometimes regret if we have done something and the other side would no longer accept us back.

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  22. This is so sweet and romantic. Reminiscing a lost love is always so touching.

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  23. It is not true love after all as the lovers separated in the end. I hope there's a happy ending for the former sweethearts.

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