Saturday, November 5, 2011

Both of Us Were Just Memories

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What’s in a room? A place where vows are made but meant to be broken…

photo: Saya

I wish I don’t have any idea
About what happened here last night,
All the memories won’t vanish
It’s a curse that curve to seal
The lips of a liar.

From every words comes up with every letters
And ends up with every tears that fall on the ground
And made every grain of soil be furnish;
From laughs it made us strong,
From tears we broke it all.

I never knew that we wont last till forever
Coz’ forever is tomorrow and tomorrow will be yesterday
And all the regrets and sins wont go away;
It will stay here in this room
Full of tears and miseries.

I wish I don’t have any idea what happen here last night,
But what happen here is a curse that left us both …memories.!

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28 comments:

  1. Chubskulit RoseApril 13, 2013 at 4:27 PM

    Some relationships are not meant to be so it doesn't last forever. I think it happens for a reason. Very expressive poem KUya.

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  2. Franc RamonApril 16, 2013 at 3:43 PM

    I guess even if it were just memories now, it still made you the person you are today. Nobody comes into our lives without a reason.

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  3. JoeyApril 16, 2013 at 3:57 PM

    Well, memories are great to remember - whether they're of happiness & joy or misery. Why? Because they're actually what we'll all have of our relationships eventually. So cherish every part of it.

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  4. Algene May C.April 16, 2013 at 4:45 PM

    This is such a wonderful post! It may be sad but reading it felt great. Next should deal with moving on. lol

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  5. The Manila UrbaniteApril 16, 2013 at 5:31 PM

    This is just so dramatically beautiful! It's full of emotions.

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  6. Mai FloresApril 16, 2013 at 5:49 PM

    This is somewhat sad, in a sense. Well, at least in the manner that I was able to interpret it. Anyway, some relationships do fail despite having vows and all. Then again, the best of marriages work when two people work hard into keeping the love alive and in being true to each other.

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  7. Pao TolentinoApril 16, 2013 at 5:58 PM

    This is beautiful. It reminds us that not everything ends up in fairy tale endings, a little reality check can come in handy especially when things get rougher than usual. :)

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  8. joyApril 16, 2013 at 6:05 PM

    Poems are not my thing - can't seem to make a good one :/ yours seem full of love and pain. Quite impressive! :)

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  9. DiaryniGraciaApril 16, 2013 at 6:11 PM

    I guess some of us, could actually relate this one.

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  10. Gigi BelenoApril 16, 2013 at 6:37 PM

    Huh, what really happened then? I wish there's a continuation of this story :)

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  11. Marri BermudezApril 16, 2013 at 9:08 PM

    Hmmm... I think this is a forbidden affair. Well, it's reality and sometimes it's better to end this kind of relationship than drown each other with sin and pain.

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  12. MakoyApril 17, 2013 at 2:45 AM

    I think it's time for the both of you to move on. If there's too much pain and lies there's no more reason for the relationship to stay.

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  13. Paula NicolasApril 17, 2013 at 4:40 AM

    My boyfriend used to say to me... "What's the use of fighting for someone that's not there anymore..." Letting go is hard, but it allows you to move on and be a better person. Loving your poem Papaleng :)

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  14. Sarah JeanApril 17, 2013 at 6:10 AM

    Wow very meaningful! I can feel the emotions po.

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  15. riz tomacruzApril 17, 2013 at 7:50 AM

    memories are fragments that will just never fade away. however sad memories are, one should realized, it's no culdesac. there will always be road leading to happier memories.

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  16. Mari BellaApril 17, 2013 at 9:17 AM

    This is exemplary, and this made me realized two things, to express inner feelings in a poem and sharpen my vocabulary. :-)

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  17. DhemzApril 17, 2013 at 10:16 AM

    very deep yet true...some relationships are not meant to be..it's sad though.

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  18. Chubskulit RoseApril 17, 2013 at 1:03 PM

    Sometimes a curse turns out well at the end... Might end up as bad memories but you learn a lesson from it.

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  19. mhie@smarlktastesApril 17, 2013 at 4:11 PM

    relationship meant to be by God's will.That's why we need to savour every moment with someone we love.

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  20. RcelApril 17, 2013 at 5:38 PM

    Ahhh... I can sense so many brokenheartedness in this poem. Indeed, not all relationships are meant to last to forever. It is unfortunate for those who will fall a victim of one. :(

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  21. betchaiApril 17, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    this may sound sad but somehow there is that richness that makes the heart sing with joy for such a soulful thought. somehow i am glad for the gift of broken relationships i got, it made me very happy where i am now, which i know maybe the same for the two in this poem

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  22. RaineApril 17, 2013 at 8:28 PM

    beautiful poem...it greatly reminds me of the song Kwarto by Sugar Free. rooms are witness to a lot of events in our lives...if only walls could speak

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  23. Erika ♥April 17, 2013 at 8:59 PM

    Reading this makes me sad :( Indeed, some things are just not meant to last.

    :) Erika
    http://erikarodica.com

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  24. Kim NievesApril 18, 2013 at 12:07 AM

    Such a great poem, though it really made me kinda sad.

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  25. ms. lenApril 18, 2013 at 3:07 AM

    It made me sad too and recall my past relationship that didin't worked well. But I'm happy that I learned from it and made me who I am now.

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  26. AlgeneApril 18, 2013 at 9:55 PM

    One of my recent posts is about the memories I have :) Those days may be over but the memories will always stay in my life..

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  27. LainyApril 19, 2013 at 12:13 AM

    Nothing lasts forever especially if it's a relationship that's not meant to be. The thing of the past will always teach us a good lesson to become better persons today and prepare for tomorrow that is about to come.

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  28. Kenneth RavidaApril 23, 2013 at 10:13 PM

    Their are memories we need to keep, but also their are memories we need to forget

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