Thursday, November 10, 2011

Adrenaline

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Your love is an adrenaline that keeps my heart beating.

photo: Liza

From the stomping of our hearts
We collide to settle our destiny
To see what’s behind and find what’s lost
Stolen memories were shuttered to the ground,

We skip, hop, and sore high
To reach the place we know were safe.
Adrenaline gives me strength
To survive every tragic lost I’d met

But every tragedy doesn’t end with tears on the eyes
And every defeat wont end with your lips sealed,
And now, I’m starting to fade away,
From your voice that I follow

To your Eyes I still could see
Adrenaline wont make me alive again
Because…
Your my adrenaline and your only a memory of what I lost.

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32 comments:

  1. MCNovember 10, 2011 at 8:57 AM

    NICE! Kakakilig! :)

    Ang ganda ng girl paps. Who is she? :)

    Pa greet po ko ng HAPPY BIRTHDAY kay KC! :)

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  2. Franc RamonApril 23, 2013 at 5:29 PM

    Love is really a great Adrenalin boost. It makes people exert extra efforts for it and face difficulties and challenges.

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  3. Pao TolentinoApril 23, 2013 at 6:02 PM

    Galing neto sir :) curious lang din.. sino po ung nasa pic :)

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  4. tessApril 23, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    Nice poem about Adrenaline. She is a pretty girl, ganda. Nakakataas talaga ng adrenalin pag may napasulyap na boys sa kanya.

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  5. Gigi BelenoApril 23, 2013 at 7:57 PM

    Beautiful girl!

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  6. Earl PabloApril 23, 2013 at 8:16 PM

    Very thoughtful piece...Do you write it by yourself? What makes you inspired to write poems?

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    1. papalengApril 24, 2013 at 8:35 AM

      just memories of the past, I am a romantic fella kasi. :)

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  7. Kim NievesApril 23, 2013 at 8:44 PM

    Love the poem! Who's that girl by the way? She looks so pretty! :)

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  8. Pa UlApril 23, 2013 at 9:28 PM

    Are you in love, it shows in your poem. I like this piece.

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  9. KarenApril 23, 2013 at 10:59 PM

    Wow, my heart beats like drum rolls too...yeah she's pretty.

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  10. joyApril 23, 2013 at 11:35 PM

    I love the highs of adrenaline rush! :) Syempre pag in love super daming times ng adrenaline rush :P and beautiful model you've got here :)

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  11. Mai FloresApril 24, 2013 at 12:16 AM

    Just curious. I don't know the lovely lady from that photo. But was she the inspiration behind this poem? This sounds tragic to me though. :(

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  12. DiaryniGraciaApril 24, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    I really do love every line you put into your blog. It's kind of who ever reads it. .going to inspire. .

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  13. papalengApril 24, 2013 at 8:34 AM

    salamat. edit ko nalang,.

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  14. homefamilyheart.comApril 24, 2013 at 9:22 AM

    Kuya, you should be a poet! Bagay sa iyo! :)

    Ria C

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  15. Chubskulit RoseApril 24, 2013 at 2:03 PM

    Love is indeed an adrenaline, sort of, but when you lost the love, so is the adrenaline.

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  16. betchaiApril 24, 2013 at 4:58 PM

    ahhh, feelings that indeed sends a rush of adrenaline :) of happiness and excitement.

    love your poem Donald, may he find another adrenaline

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  17. Mari BellaApril 24, 2013 at 5:49 PM

    Papaleng the new Filipino poet. You've again another beautiful poetry papaleng. Anyway, she's beautiful like the poet.

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  18. Mari BellaApril 24, 2013 at 5:50 PM

    poem pala :-)

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  19. LevyApril 24, 2013 at 6:03 PM

    Very nice poem. Kakakilig :)

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  20. MC CalunsodApril 24, 2013 at 6:57 PM

    I felt sad :( I love your poems, papaleng:) it always makes me think of it's deeper meaning :)

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  21. ♣ lily ♣April 24, 2013 at 7:30 PM

    I am quite unsure if I get it right but the poem feels sad to me. Is she gone? :(

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  22. CherApril 24, 2013 at 7:35 PM

    weeeee, adrenaline rush here i come! inlalabu lang ang peg ano, papaleng? hehehe

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  23. mhie@smarlkApril 24, 2013 at 7:39 PM

    Galing mo palang makata,papaleng. At ang ganda ng inspiration mo hah, ;)

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  24. DhemzApril 24, 2013 at 8:33 PM

    awwww...somebody's in love...great composition! the model is pretty...:)

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  25. AnnaApril 24, 2013 at 9:51 PM

    Love is in the air na naman. Kilig.

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  26. lenciliciousApril 25, 2013 at 2:49 AM

    It kind of telling me, 'hold on to your special someone or you'll be weak without him'.

    I love the beat of this poem. That girl is so pretty. :)

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  27. LainyApril 25, 2013 at 4:31 AM

    It would be good to put some melody into this beautiful poetry, Papaleng. Mas bongga to pag naging musika ;-)

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  28. cheerfulApril 27, 2013 at 11:43 AM

    naks, Papaleng...ang ganda ng model, good inspiration nga for this adrenaline poem. :) love nga naman, really give us lots of adrenaline for sure. :)

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  29. Ron LeybaApril 28, 2013 at 4:49 PM

    Great poem, pdeng maging kanta. And the girl, she's cute!

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