Tuesday, November 22, 2011

Hakym..

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A moving poem about genuine love.

photo: Micah

Cupid’s arrow had pierced my heart
Inscribing a name, forever will last
My mind mystified from the very start
Your face, a lovely work of art.

My soul is filled calling you my own
Your smile fills my heart when I’m alone
To be with you is were I belong
You’re a precious gem that adorns my throne.

Your ideas cheer me up
You were always there to back me up
All inhibitions are cut abrupt
With an innocent kiss that pop-me-up.

I promise harmony flows
Each day our relationship will grow
Losing you … I’ll never allow
Forever I will love you.. It’s my humble vow…

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29 comments:

  1. papalengJuly 3, 2013 at 9:26 AM

    Thanks, up to now naman romantic ako. BTW I know of a Pinoy poet by the name of Allan Cortez.

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  2. Chubskulit RoseJuly 3, 2013 at 1:22 PM

    Another master piece of yours KUya, makata ka talaga!

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  3. lenciliciousJuly 4, 2013 at 2:14 AM

    Wow such a sweet poem. May forever talaga. :)

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  4. Tingting RimartJuly 4, 2013 at 8:24 AM

    I never experienced being an inspiring to a poem. The guess I connected with were no poets at all. It would be great to be one.

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  5. CheerfulJuly 4, 2013 at 9:18 AM

    awww, sweet...another lovely poem from a romantic guy. :) keep writing and keep sharing. :)

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  6. Rovie AguisJuly 4, 2013 at 11:15 AM

    Nakakabagbag damdamin naman ang poem na ito. I fee like I'm young again and soooo inlove. Hehehe Parang kinilig akong bigla eh. LOL

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  7. betchaiJuly 11, 2013 at 10:15 AM

    you are so romantic Donald, I am sure your wife is always thrilled to read your poems, you always have the most beautiful gift to give her :)

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    1. Chubskulit RoseJuly 11, 2013 at 10:33 AM

      I do agree with Ate Betchai. I bet Ate Rose is always feeling the butterfly effect hehehe

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  8. yannieJuly 11, 2013 at 12:50 PM

    Napaka romantic mo naman Papaleng. Ilang poems na po ba nasulat nyo? Dapat publish ka na ng books, paranag collection ng poems nyo po.

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    1. papalengJuly 11, 2013 at 6:14 PM

      Noon pumasok din sa utak ko na gawing book ang poems ko. Bopol lang ako sa bagay na ito. If someone will help me, why not.. BTW siguro more than 7- poems na rin ang na-published kong poem.

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  9. smarlkJuly 11, 2013 at 2:31 PM

    Wow! You have a great talent. You should submit or join in some contest I'm sure you will win.

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    1. papalengJuly 11, 2013 at 6:12 PM

      Thank you po. I have joined some Poetyry contest pero, pang Pinas lang ata ang beauty ko.

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  10. CherryJuly 11, 2013 at 6:50 PM

    nakakaantig naman yan ng damdamin, Papaleng. kilig factor todamax, hehehe!

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  11. Tingting de RimartiJuly 11, 2013 at 8:35 PM

    OMG! This is my second comment to this post, and when I read the first one, my grammar was awful. LOL!

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  12. Ria CervantesJuly 11, 2013 at 9:56 PM

    Who is your inspiration Kuya whenever you pen poems of love? I bet it's your lovely wife. Naks! You're so gifted in writing Kuya. I seriously urge you to compile your poems, put them in ebook format and sell them off. Added income din yan. :)

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  13. Teresa MartinezJuly 11, 2013 at 10:07 PM

    It's always nice to read poems that speak of human emotions as they reach out to the heart like this one.

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  14. QuimaJuly 12, 2013 at 8:52 AM

    Very relatable poem. I wish I could write poems again just like my elementary years. You should write a book na Papaleng. Maybe a compilation of your poems. :)

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  15. Carlo Manuel AladoAugust 21, 2013 at 5:22 AM

    Continue to make these lovely poems. Love the look of your site, too.

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  16. Airra PingolAugust 21, 2013 at 5:32 AM

    so sweet nman! i can definitely relate! keep up the good work :D

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  17. LJ OcampoAugust 21, 2013 at 8:06 AM

    Surely every girl that will read this poem from their beloved will be ecstatic and hyper with glee :) ♩♪♫♪♫"That's the story of that's the glory of love". ♪♫♩♪♫ :D

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  18. Genzel KissesAugust 21, 2013 at 5:20 PM

    Nice composition <3 My favorite is the last verse (is that what you call it?) :D

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  19. Franc RamonAugust 21, 2013 at 5:36 PM

    Any lady would fall for a poem like this especially coming from Papaleng.

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  20. DiaryniGraciaAugust 21, 2013 at 11:31 PM

    I can tell that you are a talented person. Seldom I see and know people who still make good poems like you do. Keep writing:)

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  21. Leilani GamboaAugust 22, 2013 at 8:53 AM

    wow it really touches heart, i like the second paragraph most, very talented, bravo

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  22. Gil CamporazoAugust 23, 2013 at 3:04 AM

    What a vow! A humble commitment to your love stay forever.

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  23. Michael MacalosAugust 23, 2013 at 9:19 AM

    yipeeeeeee!! I can feel the kilig and sweetness while reading this poem :))

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  24. AlgeneAugust 23, 2013 at 9:41 PM

    Grabe naman to, Papaleng. First line palang, full of love na :)

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  25. EdsAugust 23, 2013 at 10:19 PM

    I admire people who still loves to create romantic poems like this one. :)

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  26. Maritel LedesmaAugust 23, 2013 at 10:50 PM

    awwww, so sweet..."forever I will love you" your loved one is so happy.

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