Sunday, August 26, 2012

Poisoned Heart

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An attempt for an angst poem.

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The link weakens day by day,
as the sting gets worse.
Some sad bitterness to say,
in my heart it will hold.

The sweetness of your voice, lost,
gone with your silence.
My pleading gaze, you abhor,
as my own fate crumbles.

Slowly you kill me inside.
Little by little,
the promise of love dissolves,
as hate consumes it all.

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9 comments:

  1. AlgeneAugust 26, 2012 at 9:34 AM

    I like the last line.. "As hate consumes it all." Highlight.

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  2. katherine SchulzAugust 26, 2012 at 9:37 AM

    Argh!! ako yata yan ah! but thanks to my FB friends..they were there for me when I was in trouble.

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  3. UnknownAugust 26, 2012 at 6:30 PM

    what a lovely poem!

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  4. papalengAugust 28, 2012 at 12:12 AM

    Oo naman. kahit ilan.

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  5. Chubskulit RoseAugust 7, 2013 at 5:12 AM

    Beautiful haiku, well put together, ikaw na talaga ang makata KUya!

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  6. betchaiAugust 7, 2013 at 8:30 AM

    very well expressed feelings, it sounds painful, but it is sooooooo true! another very beautiful poem from you, Donald!

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  7. lenciliciousAugust 8, 2013 at 4:22 AM

    Sad poem but love each words. Let's not allow hatred to conquer our hearts. :)

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  8. Mari BellaAugust 8, 2013 at 4:46 AM

    super nice poem, out of many posts i have i only have 1 poem ever and that was when my little tara had her first tooth

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  9. AlgeneAugust 8, 2013 at 7:25 AM

    Next time Papaleng, sulat ka ng ibang piece na all about happy love! Hehehe Medyo hurt ang hate consumes it all :(

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