Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Written on a Papyrus

A lover's true emotion for a lady who seems not trusting him.

photo: Jodie Anne

Through the wind I breath slowly,
With eyes close, and lips sealed
I bow down to your voice
Like my tears that’s flowing softly.

There are things on my mind that I can’t tell,
Every time I think of it,
It always have to break my heart
Now It is all written all to you.

Every single detail has been detailed
I tried to take it away
By giving my heart and time to you
But it always giving you a hard time, always..

I knew it…
And even though I always wrote your name on every papyrus I have.

29 comments:

  1. A heartfelt feeling and thought but never spoken... such is this poem.

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  2. Sabihin na kase, papaleng:) wag nang isulat sa papyrus!lol But seriously why men finds it hard sometimes to tell what they feel, I dont know :) such a nice poem :)

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    1. Minsan may mga bagay na mas masarap kung sasarilinin mo na lang,.

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  3. Makatang makata ka talaga Kuya Donald. Lovely lady in the photo.

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    1. Halatang halata ba rose. Maganda talaga ang gril na yan kasi kulang sa height.

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  4. Love the poem,I agree, ako nga my oras ako na ayaw ko na sabihin sa hubby ko ano iniisip ko kasi ayaw ko sya saktan lalo na pag mag-kagalit kami.hehehe.ikain ko na lang at matulog.

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  5. Naman!! Pang-teenager lang ang kilig, Papaleng!! Hehehe =) Napabata mo naman po ulet ang puso ko! Tama sila, makatang-makata.. Bilib ako sa mga taong gaya nyo na marunong magsulat ng poem! =)

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    1. Salamat, medyo naging romantic uli for a change

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  6. so love the poem Donald, have something to share, whenever I had a crush before and my crush did not give me attention, I simply told myself, he was too shy to express his feelings and wrote it somewhere, hahaha, so this poem brings so much smiles to my heart knowing that probably they wrote them in papyrus :) anyway, keep on inspiring us with your words.

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  7. beautiful lady! Love the poem! You really ought to write a book Kuya! :)

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  8. ayay, ilabas na kasi...sometimes it feels great to let your feelings or emotions out...:)

    ganda nang model!

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    1. tama eh! totoo kaya to.. yan ang hirap sa inyong mga lalaki eh, pinag iisip niyo kaming mga babae. tama ba mga babae?? hahaha
      chos lang. pero half meant yun! :p

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  9. Expressiveness in a relationship should not only be in pen but also in voice. Hehehe... Many men and some women are like that though. Great write-up anyway! :)

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  10. indeed what a good poem, thank you for sharing

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  11. this was me when i was in highschool haha though i did not write in papyrus back then. gosh, those were days! who's the beautiful lady, papaleng?

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  12. For most people, the written word is preferred for emotions that are better left unspoken.

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  13. pampakilig sa babae eto. Gawin mo kayang kanta, for sure patok to!

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  14. I rather hear it from my lover than reading it. Communication is what we need in a relationship,bakit pa kailangang isulat ng patula.

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  15. What a refreshing poem! Very heartfelt. She's a lucky girl! I've been in a relationship and marriage for so long, I don't remember how this feels like anymore and you put it greatly into words.

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  16. I think written words are better as you get more time to organize your thoughts as long as the recipient you should get what you have written.

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  17. very nice and indeed refreshing its nice to at least peoms once a day!! really nice! xx

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  18. Wow. Is this poem for the woman in the picture? She's pretty and this poem is wonderful as well. :)

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  19. Any girl would fall-in-love with the way you write poems Paps. :D

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  20. Lovely and lucky girl is this your soulmate?

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  21. You have an amazing talent talga Papaleng! May great articles na, may poems pa :) Such a beautiful piece.

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  22. I always admire those who can write in poems...these are just a few words but they speak a lot :)

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  23. LOve is in the air... I hope someday she'll realize how important you are in her life too!

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  24. For me, mas gugustuhin ko pa rin na sabihin sa harapan ko kesa sulat. Communication is one of the keys to a better relationship, hindi ba? Being honest sa isa't isa, yun yon :)

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