Thursday, September 24, 2015

In a Hidden Realm

Memories of a lady that once captured my heart.



In my dreams
I’m there waiting
In a hidden realm
I’m there hoping.

In a magical kingdom somewhere
I‘m there playing
With fond memories we‘d shared together
It’s my only way to keep the feeling.

In my reveries
I’m there longing
You’ve take a glimpse at me
And to see you smiling.

But though we part our ways
In a hidden realm
I’m there waiting for that day
For us to share our dreams.

20 comments:

  1. What a beautiful poem about waiting for a loved one. This is so romantic.

    ReplyDelete
  2. You're such a romantic soul, Kuya Papaleng! :)

    ReplyDelete
  3. ang lungkot naman...bumalik ba siya?

    ReplyDelete
  4. Awww! Papaleng your poems always makes me melt like an ice cream.

    ReplyDelete
  5. Such a very touching poem to share with us.

    ReplyDelete
  6. Someday, you two will meet again. Beautifully written!

    ReplyDelete
  7. Longing for the other to come back is a touching scene into the mind of your readers. The words are truly poetic.

    ReplyDelete
  8. Somebody's reminiscing about a lost love! You can actually turn this into a Taylor Swift song with more editing :)

    ReplyDelete
  9. The aching and longing for someone you cannot have for real is really a painful emotion. Poetry is the best way to express these suppressed feelings.

    ReplyDelete
  10. What a heartbreaking piece! However, beautiful words though!

    ReplyDelete
  11. Somehow, reminds me of the song Maybe this time. Somehow, maybe you'll meet again in your realm.

    ReplyDelete
  12. It is such a beautiful and touchy poem. Love reading all the words.

    ReplyDelete
  13. Again another beautiful poem about a figurative other world. I wish I could write poems like this :D

    ReplyDelete
  14. It's rare to see this coming from a guy. It's usually girls who pine for the guy they love. I hope the one you are waiting for will appear soon!

    ReplyDelete
  15. I feel like this is a poem I'd share with that person I've been waiting for years. Haha. Oh well, though I usually say I'm tired of waiting for our time again, I still find myself hoping.

    ReplyDelete
  16. Such a sad poem, yet there's still hope that someday both would meet again. What are your inspirations in making such great poems?

    ReplyDelete
  17. This is so romantic and touching. Love your meaningful poem and soft way of delivery. For us to share our dreams.

    ReplyDelete
  18. wahaha "Memories of a lady that once captured my heart." Who is she? Where did she go?

    ReplyDelete
  19. Ahh, breaking up. I'm praying and keeping faith that I will never experience anything like that anymore. I'm thankful my last breakup returned to me and we eventually got married. :)

    ReplyDelete
  20. Whoever this lady is, she's very lucky coz someone is still thinking and dreaming of her.

    ReplyDelete