Tuesday, April 2, 2013

The Promise

A vow made by a boy to a a beautiful girl whom he truly loves.

photo: Kevin & Yanna

As we slowly approach
Our destiny
I will be there standing
By your side.

As we journey
To the world
Of lies and fears
Of trials and errors
Of smiles and tears
I’ll always stay.

If ever you see me fall
Or see me cry
Believe me, you will
See me stand up smiling and saying…

No matter what happens,
No matter what problems,
The one you could rely
Will never let
You down

I Promise…

27 comments:

  1. Cute couple on the picture
    Nice lines on the poem
    Very touching story between two people. :)

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  2. super ganda naman ng poem na ito. .napaka inspiring. .

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  3. Romantic as you are, GO GO Boy!

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  4. The photo is that of my son and her ex-girlfriend. ang mga taong naging inspirasyon ko to come out with this poem.

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    1. ay ex-? what happened to the promise? nah!

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  5. Thanks po, inspire lang ako ng ginawa ko ang poem na ito.

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  6. This is such a sweet poem! Hallmark must hire you for your immense talent in poetry! ♥

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  7. Another poem from Don Romantico Papaleng. It's really nicely written.

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  8. Awwww, sana sulatan din ako ng bf ko niyan. hahaha! nakakainlove!

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  9. I would be very happy if my guy would also make this promise to me. =) You have a way with words, papaleng. =)

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  10. nice promise eh? Hope he indeed will do all of the said above as a man hehe Great photo! xx

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  11. Awwwss! Napaka sweet naman ng promise na yan. Sino po ang mga models sa poen na ito Papaleng?

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  12. awww! that's sweet! they look good together. lovely poem!

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  13. This is a a beautiful and inspiring poem to those who are in relationship or planning to have a relationship. Love it.

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  14. Awww! Such beautiful promise! If only such is every man's promise! :D

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  15. Very inspiring! I love the positive perspective on this one.

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  16. nice words and promises but only a few ang ganito Papaleng right? hehe

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  17. a vow to take
    with hearts entwined
    words fell like dew
    a music to a soul
    love is divine

    what a thought-provoking piece...

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  18. Simple promises but when taken to heart could lead to forever. The poem draw forth so much youthful love. There are but a few young ones today who take their promises into action. My say: "Just walk the talk, will yuh?" LOL!

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  19. love nga naman, ang tamaan, nagiging makata... it's such a nice feeling... lalo na pag-araw-araw mong nararamdaman. Yahweh bless.

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  20. ang ganda naman ng poem ni Papaleng.Kaka in love.
    No matter what happens...

    I promise...
    Tess

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  21. Great poem. ..
    You're in love indeed.

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  22. aww, such a lovely poem...:) kaka-inspired naman po at mukhang inlove ka or inspired when you made this poem. galing!

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  23. very inspiring.. I love how it is so simple yet evokes many emotions... :)

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  24. At first when I see the link on the thread, i thought it was a commentary on a movie I see a long time ago, with the same title as your post. But its a poem about a vow given to her true love. Hope that they live happy for the rest of their lives and love each other

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  25. Very heartfelt and romantic. Thanks sir papaleng!

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  26. Oh, the promise of true love, what could be sweeter and lovelier than this?

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