Monday, January 9, 2012

My Lonely Heart

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As pain slowly pierces your heart, will you still find the strength to save a relationship?

photo: Diane

Ahead lies an empty road to journey
Each light that adorns the streets are gloomy
The fading moon is the only ally
Who lits my way a light
But then still… I seek my way to find you.

My soul …now wasted and tired
With all the battles we’ve been through
You and I … hoping for something good to happen.
Tears flowing … as pain slowly, steadily pierces my heart to death
The sound of silence … rips my heart apart…killing me…

My mind …reflecting and expecting for something
You alone can answer
Will you ever be with me again?
Because I’ve completely lost everything
By the time you left and say goodbye …

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24 comments:

  1. fallenrhainnesJanuary 11, 2012 at 12:20 AM

    so sad naman nyan.. :

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  2. MCJanuary 14, 2012 at 2:09 AM

    Sad sad naman! :(

    Ganda niya talaga paps! :)

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  3. Chubskulit RoseSeptember 30, 2013 at 2:53 PM

    Oh why oh why, the poem is sad ...

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  4. Marie, shiny pearlSeptember 30, 2013 at 3:03 PM

    Breakups are never easy but like they say - what can't kill you can make you stronger - so don't close your doors, unless you get to meet someone better, choz! :) :D

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  5. Mhie LeeSeptember 30, 2013 at 6:26 PM

    so sad, are you okay,Papaleng. saying goodbye is not easy and sometime we lost our sanity for a week or a month before we can move on and face the real world.

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  6. Tingting R.September 30, 2013 at 6:35 PM

    I do not feel lonely when I see that pretty, smiling face of your kiddo.

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  7. nova hedgesSeptember 30, 2013 at 6:54 PM

    I'm sure in the next life, you will be with that special person.

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  8. LainySeptember 30, 2013 at 10:34 PM

    I wonder who's Diane in your life, Papaleng? LOL! Baket sobrang apektado ang peg nyo? Hihihi! Seriously, this people is so morose. It's never easy to go through break ups.

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    1. papalengSeptember 17, 2016 at 4:14 PM

      Alam mo na yun. She left kasi for Manhattan, NY

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  9. RcelOctober 1, 2013 at 1:25 AM

    It never gets easier but it can be mended. Like what the song said, "We're not broken just bend, so we can (still) learn to love again".

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  10. Marie ImperialOctober 1, 2013 at 2:53 AM

    Wow! My soul........ wasted and tired....... nakakaiyak naman. :-(

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  11. jennyLOctober 1, 2013 at 3:01 AM

    aww painful and sad naman to.. I don't want to indulge too much mahahawa ako sa sadness hehe.

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  12. lenciliciousOctober 1, 2013 at 5:52 AM

    I hate goodbyes. It's so sad.

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  13. rizOctober 1, 2013 at 6:42 AM

    reading your ode, i remember a favorite song of mine - something like, "are you gonna stay with the one who loves you or are you going back to the one you love". somebody's staying or somebody's leaving -parties affected may get to be happy or be sad. however, one thing should be exulting -the experience of falling in love.

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  14. Rovie AguisOctober 1, 2013 at 8:36 AM

    Parang napakalungkot naman ng kwentong ito Papaleng. Goodbyes are always part of every relationship I just hope they will find their way together...

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  15. FrancOctober 2, 2013 at 8:09 AM

    Ended on a sad note but good byes always comes with hello.

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  16. working mamaOctober 2, 2013 at 9:30 AM

    goodbye is hard but we have to face it no matter what it is

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  17. Ron LeybaOctober 2, 2013 at 10:13 AM

    Sad poem. Goodbyes are not the end of everything though. :)

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  18. Ron LeybaOctober 2, 2013 at 10:14 AM

    Goodbye is hard, but it doesn't mean the end of everything. I think, its a start of a brand new beginning.

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  19. ♣ lily ♣October 2, 2013 at 8:00 PM

    Sometimes we really have to say goodbye to people we love the most...even if it's hard. Time would heal the wounds naman. ;)

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  20. Mai FloresOctober 2, 2013 at 8:53 PM

    Naka-relate po ako dito at some point. Then again, it's through failed relationships that eventually lead you to the right one. :) Goodbyes are meant to be said, so that a new "hello" can also be welcomed. :) Nicely written poem by the way. :)

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  21. AlgeneOctober 2, 2013 at 10:27 PM

    "Because I've completely lost everything." I always hear this from my friends who have ended their relationships with the ones they love. Saying goodbye may be hard but sometimes it's the best thing to do. The lonely heart will soon find the right one.

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  22. Angie VianzonOctober 3, 2013 at 6:38 PM

    Awww :( Very sad poem.
    Oh well, goodbyes are not always the end. Always remember that there is always a rainbow after the rain.

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